Writer’s Workshop: Jack

November 17, 2010 · 63 comments

Write a poem about a time someone made you smile.

You sounded funny on the phone
Something fishy with your tone
Eager to meet us back at home
With a “package”…I should have known.

You opened the door up just a crack
You smiled at us, we smiled back
Not sure what to make of your strange pack
Until it opened and out popped Jack.

Jack
Jack
Jack

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Mama's Losin' It

Now it’s your turn!

Choose a prompt, post it on your blog, and come back to add your name to the link list below. Be sure to sign up with the actual post URL and not just your basic blog URL (click on the title of your post for that URL). For good comment karma try to comment on the three blogs above your name!!

The Prompts:

1.) Why are you burned out?
2.) Write a poem about a time someone made you smile.
3.) A list of 10 reasons you or do not drink coffee.
4.) An open letter to a celebrity.
5.) That one time you met your online friend in real life (was it everything you thought it would be?)

Mama Kat Loves You When You Love Her



{ 58 comments… read them below or add one }

Tonya November 17, 2010 at 10:40 pm

What a darling puppy and wonderful addition to your family. :)

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Holly L November 17, 2010 at 10:55 pm

Jack would surely make me smile..he’s cute!

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Kisha Floren November 17, 2010 at 11:17 pm

Like you had a choice after the little one’s smile…look at her! Only thing that could be cuter than that puppy. :)

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Leslie Limon November 17, 2010 at 11:23 pm

Awwww! What a cute little puppy! I want one! :)

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Natalie November 17, 2010 at 11:26 pm

That is the cutest little dog. EVER. I almost makes me want a little one. He kinda reminds me of Gismo from the movie Gremlins. Or an Ewok.

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Dominique @Dominique's Desk November 18, 2010 at 12:25 am

That’s a really cute puppy.

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Angie November 18, 2010 at 12:48 am

Oh, my goodness! Jack’s adorable! Is he a shih-tsu (sp?). And Natalie’s right, he does look like a baby Ewok :)

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Tima November 18, 2010 at 1:10 am

He’s adorable!

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Melissa B. November 18, 2010 at 2:04 am

He’s the guy who’s hanging out in back.
The guy who’s always had a knack
for opening up your heart a crack.
The one who came from in a sack?
I know he’s your guy Jack!

Need to Get Some Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzsss

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Kirsty November 18, 2010 at 2:31 am

Cute cute CUTE

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ElizOF November 18, 2010 at 2:56 am

Jack is adorable and the poem is fitting… a real gem of a gift! :-)
Elizabeth

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Prg November 18, 2010 at 2:56 am

What a great package and what a great reason to smile! I would too!

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Paula Kiger November 18, 2010 at 3:12 am

Aw, TOO CUTE! Jack definitely looks like a perpetuator of smiles!

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Karen, author of "My Funny Dad, Harry" November 18, 2010 at 3:16 am

I like your poem! Jack makes me smile too!

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Christy @ cat fur to make kitten britches November 18, 2010 at 3:21 am

What a sweet little face! Who could *not* smile upon seeing that?!?! Clever poem, too, btw!
~Christy

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Dumb Mom November 18, 2010 at 3:59 am

Wait? You got a dog? I thought you were doing the rodents for a while? It’s your big heart I think. It should be smaller. Like just big enough for your kids and me. And I guess Pat. A little corner for Pat would be okay too.

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HisBell November 18, 2010 at 4:06 am

I’m not much of a doggy (or pet, for that matter) person… but he’s the cutest furball!

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Lesley November 18, 2010 at 4:16 am

That’s a pretty cute little package! My daughter would somehow come down with some immediate case of a dreaded disease just to be able to stay home from school for a day or two with that little lovey. What a cutie!!

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Diane November 18, 2010 at 4:25 am

Precious. Nothing can put a smile on the face faster than a little puppy. :)

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Shell November 18, 2010 at 4:39 am

So cute!

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Funkidivagirl November 18, 2010 at 4:55 am

THAT IS THE CUTEST PUPPY EVER!!!!!

I have a puppy and he always makes me smile. Even when he is being bad…which is often!

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liz November 18, 2010 at 5:04 am

Our dog is Jack, too!

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Heligirl November 18, 2010 at 5:27 am

I know exactly how you feel. I’ve had my puppy, Jack, for 11 years now and he’s my little lover man whose been with me through thick and thin. I used to sing “You are my sunshine” to him during my rough years (more on that in today’s post on Heligirl – a letter to Own Wilson). Thanks for the reminder of what our pets really mean to us, even after kids. :)

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Jill November 18, 2010 at 5:31 am

Cute pooch! I’m really excited about my poem too! It’s my 1st attempt… and a story I’ve never told on my blog.Thanks for opportunity! :)

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Kmama November 18, 2010 at 5:33 am

My friend has a dog that looks just like Jack, except her’s is named Ozzie.

But I’m partial to Jack…in fact, I named my oldest son Jack!

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Jen November 18, 2010 at 5:41 am

He is adorable!

And this explains a lot.

Who gave you this puppy?

Is it just like having a newborn?

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KLZ November 18, 2010 at 6:02 am

Puppies do sound funny on the phone.

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Stacey November 18, 2010 at 6:10 am

Ahhh! So cute! And great poem. You even rhyme!

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Booyah's Momma November 18, 2010 at 6:13 am

I’ve always been a cat person… but seeing little Jack almost makes me want to get a dog. He is adorable!

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Jennifer November 18, 2010 at 6:17 am

I want one!!!! Darn David and his not letting us have an inside dog. :( But yay for you and your new puppy!

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S Club Mama November 18, 2010 at 6:24 am

too cute, Kat!

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Angelia Sims Hardy November 18, 2010 at 6:25 am

If that is a shih(t)-tzu puppy, you are in soooooo much trouble. They are heart stealers. So cute and funny in their personality.
I just adore mine and I was never a little dog fan.

This week, I dedicated my post to my mother-in-law who has been in ICU and now the recovery floor of the hospital since the end of September. What a trooper and fighter she is. Never give up…

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Stephanie Snyder November 18, 2010 at 6:33 am

Your prompts were GREAT this week! LOVED ‘em! :D And love your photos today – too flippin’ cute!

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AZLB November 18, 2010 at 6:50 am

what kind of dog is this…looks alot like the Havanese we are getting in 2 weeks!

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Christy November 18, 2010 at 7:02 am

awwwww he is too cute!

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Jeanie Cullip November 18, 2010 at 7:14 am

Linking up with you on Writers Workshop for the first time!

Blessings & Giggles
Jeanie

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singlemama_cc November 18, 2010 at 7:42 am

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww his is too friggin cute!

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Nicole @ Moments that Define Life November 18, 2010 at 7:55 am

Adorable! So…..what was the “package”?

Did you hop over to mine by chance? You might like it! I’m #2 on the linky. Check out who makes me smile oh and why I’m addicted to coffee. :-)

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kaye November 18, 2010 at 8:06 am

oh a puppy . . . the best kind of surprise :)

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Kathy November 18, 2010 at 8:12 am

awwwwwwww Jack is soooooooo sweet!!!!

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Los November 18, 2010 at 8:19 am

Oh man, Pat finally broke down?!?!?!?

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Michelle Pixie November 18, 2010 at 8:22 am

Awwww Jack is so cute! :)

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BelovedAimee November 18, 2010 at 9:32 am

we just had to rehome our shitzu ( I can never flippin spell that and I do not care) I miss Bella very much she was a sweet girl. Very loving, cuddly, playful. But be careful about the potty business…she was a pee-er too ;)

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Natalie November 18, 2010 at 10:08 am

Okay, that makes me want to get another puppy!

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Scary Mommy November 18, 2010 at 10:15 am

Whoa. You got a puppy?!?!

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Christan/MamaBearPing November 18, 2010 at 10:47 am

This is my first time to do your writer’s workshop . . . and I loved it! You have some great ideas to get the creative juices flowin’.
And your vlogs slay me. Really.
So, I’m number 3 on the linky thingys above.
Come and check me out!
http://doithalfway.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/coffee-by-any-other-name-would-smell-just-as-sweet/

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trash November 18, 2010 at 11:52 am

You got a puppy??? Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!

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alissa November 18, 2010 at 12:39 pm

AH, what a cute doggie…what kind? We are in the hunt…deciding if we should add to the chaos or not.

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The Mom Chef ~ Taking on Magazines One Recipe at a Time November 18, 2010 at 12:39 pm

Cute dog and even cuter daughter! Love your poem too. Thanks for letting me in on the fun. I enjoyed it.

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jackie November 18, 2010 at 3:36 pm

Aw, how cute!!!! My son would probably be scared of him. He prefers big dogs!

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Karen @ Time Crafted November 18, 2010 at 3:49 pm

Now that is one darn tootin’ cute pup!!! Loved reading your sweet ode to him too! :>

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Marni November 18, 2010 at 4:59 pm

Wow! I want to play this sometime!! Great idea for a post. I’d do the last one for sure.

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Jenners November 18, 2010 at 5:33 pm

I love the poem … and I love Jack!!!

I’m wildly late in linking up but what the hey … I had fun writing my post!

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angie November 19, 2010 at 10:32 am

Jack is adorable.

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Kristy November 19, 2010 at 11:12 am

Aww, now I am smiling too!

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Allison @ Alli 'n Son November 19, 2010 at 12:37 pm

Could he have picked a cuter puppy? Just adorable!

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Sarah @ Catching the Magic November 19, 2010 at 11:20 pm

A fabulously light-hearted poem with a beautiful surprise! Enjoy!

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Alisha November 22, 2010 at 5:14 am

I haven’t been blogging for so long, that I didn’t even know you had a new blog location! Wow! Cute poem!!!

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